Surrounded
surrounded
they swarm about her
engulf her
drag her under
so many
all around
yet
she is alone
all alone
deep down
she knows
she always has been
trivial conections
fabricated chemistry
none mattered
the real
it hurts
the light is blinding
truth
realization burns
her heart aches
mention of his name
stabs
arms flailing
legs kicking
lungs full
lies bubble
spill in
fall out
the surface
so
so
far away
a hand breaks
the surface
parts
reach
deeper
the bottom
is not so far
from
the top
they swarm about her
engulf her
drag her under
so many
all around
yet
she is alone
all alone
deep down
she knows
she always has been
trivial conections
fabricated chemistry
none mattered
the real
it hurts
the light is blinding
truth
realization burns
her heart aches
mention of his name
stabs
arms flailing
legs kicking
lungs full
lies bubble
spill in
fall out
the surface
so
so
far away
a hand breaks
the surface
parts
reach
deeper
the bottom
is not so far
from
the top
4 Comments:
The imagery is really great in this one honey.
Thanks Mom, I think it's my favorite one yet.
This is excellent. I've been in that place myself, so it rang true :)
Thanks...glad that someone else can relate.
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